
Melting over the horizon,
Pale, yet radiant.
What do I see,
Is it the Earth or the Heaven!?
Waves comfort,
Over our sandy feet.
Passing the energy of a thousand droplets,
To me, to you, to us!
Trees of palm filter the sun,
Beautiful patterns on your face…
This is your paradise,
You deserve it.
Soft blankets of the seven skies,
Come together, to embrace you.
Stop, don’t run, this is it,
You have run enough,
Thought enough,
Cried enough…
Now rest! Sleep, and be lost.
Do you hear it, ‘cause I do,
The beautiful violin…
~ Arnav Gupta
Great words to help everyone find their peace and piece of paradise. Hope all is well Arnav. Allan
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Thanks for such a beautiful comment, Allan. Yes, everything is alright! I had doubts publishing this because I thought it might turn out to be too gloomy 😀
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This is a lovely poem, Arnav.
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Thank you so much Robbie! Have a great day
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Well written.
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Thanks Jamie!
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👌🏻❤🌈
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Thanks ❤
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Poem and photos are all beautiful. Nice work.
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Thanks a lot Schingle! It means a lot to me 😀
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❤️
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❤️❤️
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Your words are definitely like a violin…..soothing and melancholic. Beautiful poem.
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Wow, your comment was so beautiful! I love hearing the violin, it has got a melanchonic touch, but it heals every wound 😀
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There are some really beautiful lines here.
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Thanks JYP, I really appreciate it! Have a good day 😀
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I’m so impressed Arnav: Gorgeous photo. Lovely poem. Beautifully put. Fondly, Muriel
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Aww, thank you so much Muriel! I really appreciate it. Virtual hugs to you 😀
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Great poem arnav!
Really needed this
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Thanks a lot Akshita!
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You have brilliantly captured the essence of serenity in this lovely piece. 🖤
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Oh, thank you so very much Carter! I appreciate your encouragement 😀
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You’re welcome, my friend.
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Wow Arnav I am very much impressed the way you write, your words are very matured and I loved it. You have a bright and huge success ahead of you.
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Thank you so much Daphny! I really appreciate your wonderful comment 😀
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You’re most welcome! Keep on writing and keep shinning 🤗
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seriously your poems are just getting better!
keep writing them and keep writing refreshing😃
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Thanks Duo! I really appreciate your wonderful comment 😀
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What a beautiful poem Arnav!!! It is so mesmerising how you earlier captured the piano and now the violin in your writing !!! …….
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Thank you so much Khushi 😀 I appreciate your comment! Though your poetry skills are far too ahead of me, haha!
I had earlier subscribed to your blog, but I wasn’t getting any notifications, so I re-subscribed.
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Another masterpiece, my friend. Absolutely Wonderful poem! “Soft blankets of the seven skies, Come together, to embrace you.” What an imagery! Simply splendid. “You have run enough” is a relevant line to say to all of us at some point and particularly applies to students. Students have to ran a lot behind abstract constructions (NUMBERS) to be at the top of their game. It’s a race. And unnecessarily so.
PS: Sorry for the late comment, was on a blogging break. Will catch up with all your posts now 💪
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Thank you so much Sahana! Your comments are never short of inspiration 🙂 Welcome back to WordPress! I will be looking forward to your posts!
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It’s not gloomy at all Arnav! In fact it’s full of colour; wonderful imagery; hope & inspiration. Well done! 👏👏😁😁
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Thank you so much Ken! Your commen’ts just as beautiful 😀
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Beautiful lines, Arnav. I don’t know another 14-year old that could write that lyrically.
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Thank you so much, Pat! That’s a really big compliment!
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What lovely colors. Indeed, makes one wonder if it’s earth or heaven.
And the advise to cease running. Yup. Slow down, everyone. How else are we to appreciate what’s in front of us. So lovely. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.
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Beautiful, Arnav.
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Arnav you have a succinct and sensitive way with words
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Thank you so much, I so appreciate your comment.
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